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		<title>Comment on Making Choices by Kristin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Mar 2010 18:03:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I really needed something like this. God bless google and you!
Thanks a bunch.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really needed something like this. God bless google and you!<br />
Thanks a bunch.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Geosynchron&#8221; Is Here. Officially. by David Louis Edelman</title>
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		<dc:creator>David Louis Edelman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Mar 2010 20:23:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Glad you&#039;re enjoying the series, Jason! You&#039;re right that the MultiReal concept isn&#039;t wholly original (and what is, anyway)? Don&#039;t know if you&#039;ve read anything by Greg Egan before, but he often engages in the same kinds of speculation. And unlike me, he actually knows what he&#039;s talking about. :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Glad you&#8217;re enjoying the series, Jason! You&#8217;re right that the MultiReal concept isn&#8217;t wholly original (and what is, anyway)? Don&#8217;t know if you&#8217;ve read anything by Greg Egan before, but he often engages in the same kinds of speculation. And unlike me, he actually knows what he&#8217;s talking about. <img src='http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Geosynchron&#8221; Is Here. Officially. by Jason</title>
		<link>http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/book-news/geosynchron-is-here/comment-page-1/#comment-4887</link>
		<dc:creator>Jason</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Mar 2010 08:30:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, I read the first two books in the trilogy in about 5 days and I&#039;m almost halfway through Geosynchron, after finding them in the Kindle Store &quot;Recommendations&quot; list last month.  The MultiReal concept is extraordinary- one of those things that, upon reading it, caused me to wonder why it had never appeared in science fiction before.  After some time, I realized it has been tried before but your effort is far more complex, imaginative, and engaging than anything I have come across.  I find myself constantly thinking about how the concept would function if I were to experience it, and what its implications (and limitations) would be in my world.  I would say more about that but I don&#039;t want to spoil anything for new readers.  Suffice to say it is a rare book that can dominate my thinking during non-reading hours to the extent the Jump 225 trilogy has.  I&#039;m looking forward to more of you work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, I read the first two books in the trilogy in about 5 days and I&#8217;m almost halfway through Geosynchron, after finding them in the Kindle Store &#8220;Recommendations&#8221; list last month.  The MultiReal concept is extraordinary- one of those things that, upon reading it, caused me to wonder why it had never appeared in science fiction before.  After some time, I realized it has been tried before but your effort is far more complex, imaginative, and engaging than anything I have come across.  I find myself constantly thinking about how the concept would function if I were to experience it, and what its implications (and limitations) would be in my world.  I would say more about that but I don&#8217;t want to spoil anything for new readers.  Suffice to say it is a rare book that can dominate my thinking during non-reading hours to the extent the Jump 225 trilogy has.  I&#8217;m looking forward to more of you work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Bad Creative Writing Advice by Aric</title>
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		<dc:creator>Aric</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Mar 2010 17:03:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Although I disagree with much of Emily&#039;s disagreement (I thought the initial post was brilliant), I do think that &quot;ejaculate&quot; is a poor word choice to describe anything but actual ejaculation. Of sperm. In orgasm. There are many other words, with different and more specific connotations, from which to choose: eject, thrust, toss, jettison, and hurl, for example. In general, too many adverbial dialogue tags become obtrusive for me as a reader, especially when used with terse dialogue.

&quot;I disagree,&quot; she chortled.
&quot;I really don&#039;t care,&quot; he huffed.
&quot;Well, you should,&quot; she whined.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Although I disagree with much of Emily&#8217;s disagreement (I thought the initial post was brilliant), I do think that &#8220;ejaculate&#8221; is a poor word choice to describe anything but actual ejaculation. Of sperm. In orgasm. There are many other words, with different and more specific connotations, from which to choose: eject, thrust, toss, jettison, and hurl, for example. In general, too many adverbial dialogue tags become obtrusive for me as a reader, especially when used with terse dialogue.</p>
<p>&#8220;I disagree,&#8221; she chortled.<br />
&#8220;I really don&#8217;t care,&#8221; he huffed.<br />
&#8220;Well, you should,&#8221; she whined.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Geosynchron&#8221; Is Here. Officially. by David Louis Edelman</title>
		<link>http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/book-news/geosynchron-is-here/comment-page-1/#comment-4885</link>
		<dc:creator>David Louis Edelman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 21:22:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kail: Patience! I&#039;m guessing that once the iPad comes out -- provided it&#039;s not a horrible bomb -- my publisher will jump on that format too. Might take a bit, but I&#039;m guessing it will happen.

As for DRM-free... don&#039;t know when (or if) that will happen. Sorry. :-( Now if it were up to me..........</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kail: Patience! I&#8217;m guessing that once the iPad comes out &#8212; provided it&#8217;s not a horrible bomb &#8212; my publisher will jump on that format too. Might take a bit, but I&#8217;m guessing it will happen.</p>
<p>As for DRM-free&#8230; don&#8217;t know when (or if) that will happen. Sorry. <img src='http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':-(' class='wp-smiley' />  Now if it were up to me&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Geosynchron&#8221; Is Here. Officially. by Kail</title>
		<link>http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/book-news/geosynchron-is-here/comment-page-1/#comment-4884</link>
		<dc:creator>Kail</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 21:18:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>But i don&#039;t have a Kindle, I have an android phone how do i read your book on that? Where can i get your book without DRM so i can read it how i want when i want where i want?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>But i don&#8217;t have a Kindle, I have an android phone how do i read your book on that? Where can i get your book without DRM so i can read it how i want when i want where i want?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Martin Amis&#8217; &#8220;The Information&#8221; by The Writer&#8217;s Life (A Case for the Humble Bin Man) &#124; Errant Ramblings: Mitzi Szereto's Weblog</title>
		<link>http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/book-reviews/the-information/comment-page-1/#comment-4883</link>
		<dc:creator>The Writer&#8217;s Life (A Case for the Humble Bin Man) &#124; Errant Ramblings: Mitzi Szereto's Weblog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 12:16:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] aspiring writers, I recommend the Martin Amis novel The Information. Flawed or not, it deals with the grim realities of the publishing business and &#8220;life&#8221; [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] aspiring writers, I recommend the Martin Amis novel The Information. Flawed or not, it deals with the grim realities of the publishing business and &#8220;life&#8221; [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Geosynchron&#8221; Is Here. Officially. by Chris</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 09:48:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats David! I wholly agree with the rave reviews, I simply adore your trilogy. Hopefully it&#039;s just the beginning of a great career. :o)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats David! I wholly agree with the rave reviews, I simply adore your trilogy. Hopefully it&#8217;s just the beginning of a great career. <img src='http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_surprised.gif' alt=':o' class='wp-smiley' /> )</p>
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		<title>Comment on My New Sony VAIO Laptop by Loreen Que</title>
		<link>http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/technology/new-laptop/comment-page-2/#comment-4880</link>
		<dc:creator>Loreen Que</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 05:30:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am a 65 yr young amateur computer user so plz excuse...just downloaded my company&#039;s ofc XP disc into my Vaio laptop that&#039;s brand new. Is this OK w/Wind 7 op system naturally installed?  On another note been reading past comments, advice, etc., which has been helpful in prepping me.  Thanking you, in advance for any assistance.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am a 65 yr young amateur computer user so plz excuse&#8230;just downloaded my company&#8217;s ofc XP disc into my Vaio laptop that&#8217;s brand new. Is this OK w/Wind 7 op system naturally installed?  On another note been reading past comments, advice, etc., which has been helpful in prepping me.  Thanking you, in advance for any assistance.</p>
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		<title>Comment on At the Edge of Reality Lies Madness. by David J. Williams &#187; Blog Archive &#187; David Edelman&#8217;s GEOSYNCHRON</title>
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		<dc:creator>David J. Williams &#187; Blog Archive &#187; David Edelman&#8217;s GEOSYNCHRON</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Feb 2010 20:34:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] different takes on the future of cyberpunk; well, he&#8217;s crossed the finish line first with GEOSYNCHRON, which brings the acclaimed (and quite brilliant) Jump 225 Trilogy to a halt.  Featuring gorgeous [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] different takes on the future of cyberpunk; well, he&#8217;s crossed the finish line first with GEOSYNCHRON, which brings the acclaimed (and quite brilliant) Jump 225 Trilogy to a halt.  Featuring gorgeous [...]</p>
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