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		<title>Comment on Goodbye, Vickie Lynn by Bryan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bryan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Jul 2009 21:49:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I quite agree with everything feldman writes in this piece, especially the shameful way our society&#039;s culture promotes the whole thing in the first place.  as for why the public is so interested?  the term &quot;the culture of celebrity&quot; didn&#039;t just fall out of the sky.  north americans have no royalty or any real heroes, so celebs fill the blank where our need to admire goes. and the particular fascination with the downfall of celebrities?  the german language has a word - &quot;schaddenfreud&quot; which roughly translates to &quot;taking pleasure in the misfortune of others&quot; or words to that effect.  i guess it gets back to seeing someone else fall down makes us feel like we&#039;re not such horrific screws-ups ourselves.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I quite agree with everything feldman writes in this piece, especially the shameful way our society&#8217;s culture promotes the whole thing in the first place.  as for why the public is so interested?  the term &#8220;the culture of celebrity&#8221; didn&#8217;t just fall out of the sky.  north americans have no royalty or any real heroes, so celebs fill the blank where our need to admire goes. and the particular fascination with the downfall of celebrities?  the german language has a word &#8211; &#8220;schaddenfreud&#8221; which roughly translates to &#8220;taking pleasure in the misfortune of others&#8221; or words to that effect.  i guess it gets back to seeing someone else fall down makes us feel like we&#8217;re not such horrific screws-ups ourselves.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Will the Novel Die? by Icecycle</title>
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		<dc:creator>Icecycle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jun 2009 07:29:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Twas HTML that killed the beast, the bi-planes did a damn nice job with the bullets though.

I just found this and thought it was pretty perceptive (coming in so late to the party hurts; the ashtrays are full and the glasses are empty.)

We will chip.
(My wife hates this; number of the beast and all that; but.)
When it becomes available; a chip in the head will be real time, broad band internet.
(And in the year 9999 on December 31, somebody&#039;s head will explode; we never learn.)

I still read books; I sit out in the car late at night and light up (hey! we are PC here, nobody smokes in our world) sip some vodka and coffee, and read the newest nurse novel.

Damn, I just realized, no one has wrote a nurse novel for years.

OK, you are right, you are right. The novel is dying as we speak; first they came for the nurse novels, then (I hope) they will come for the sparkly vampire novels. . .
Oh that thought went south in a hurry.

I guess I will just have to go off and buy one or more of your books.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Twas HTML that killed the beast, the bi-planes did a damn nice job with the bullets though.</p>
<p>I just found this and thought it was pretty perceptive (coming in so late to the party hurts; the ashtrays are full and the glasses are empty.)</p>
<p>We will chip.<br />
(My wife hates this; number of the beast and all that; but.)<br />
When it becomes available; a chip in the head will be real time, broad band internet.<br />
(And in the year 9999 on December 31, somebody&#8217;s head will explode; we never learn.)</p>
<p>I still read books; I sit out in the car late at night and light up (hey! we are PC here, nobody smokes in our world) sip some vodka and coffee, and read the newest nurse novel.</p>
<p>Damn, I just realized, no one has wrote a nurse novel for years.</p>
<p>OK, you are right, you are right. The novel is dying as we speak; first they came for the nurse novels, then (I hope) they will come for the sparkly vampire novels. . .<br />
Oh that thought went south in a hurry.</p>
<p>I guess I will just have to go off and buy one or more of your books.</p>
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		<title>Comment on A Guide to Ethical Self-Promotion by Genrewonk &#187; Publishing is not a Zero-Sum game</title>
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		<dc:creator>Genrewonk &#187; Publishing is not a Zero-Sum game</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jun 2009 12:01:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] you, other than sell better?  I mean, at least I can understand the motive behind you going after David Louis Edelman, I mean he did let everyone know how you (badly) Photoshopped yourself into a book signing.   [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows&#8221; by David Louis Edelman</title>
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		<dc:creator>David Louis Edelman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 17:42:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the detailed commentary, Hector.</description>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows&#8221; by Hector Manriquez</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hector Manriquez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 16:47:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I forgot to add my Facebook =P.
Just in case XD

Greetings!</description>
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Just in case XD</p>
<p>Greetings!</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows&#8221; by Hector Manriquez</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hector Manriquez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 16:46:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, I really enjoyed reading what you had to say on this book, which is my top favorite of the series.
I felt you were truly objective and, to some point, wise. I read your predictions and I have to say, I wasn&#039;t really that amazed with them (most hardcore Harry Potter fans had a lot of those predictions); what really amazed me was how you got to those predictions: not by fully understanding the whole plot, but by understanding the AUTHOR and the way she toys with her own story and what she has extracted from external sources, like classic stories and folklore.

You know, I also felt that some deaths were very random at first, but I think that&#039;s only because Deathly Hallows is a bit fast-paced (especially compared with Order of the Phoenix). Again, most hardcore Potter-fans would help understanding the deaths here, if only there was one close by... oh wait, there is! Yours truly =). If you will, I&#039;d like to revise some of the deaths that took place in Deathly Hallows and I would be very very flattered if some readers would give me their feedback.

&lt;b&gt;Tonks and Lupin&lt;/b&gt;
A huge and obvious clue of Lupin&#039;s death was given since the Marauder&#039;s Map appeared on the series. Messrs. Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs. Many Potter-fans guessed (correctly) that JKR was giving us the death order in this introduction. This theory was strengthened enormously with Sirius&#039;s death, and later on with Pettigrew&#039;s. The moment Pettigrew died, it became obvious that Lupin would snuff it too, and he did. I found the whole map names-death order relationship very clever. It was yelling us who was going to die, right from book 3.
Tonks was some sort of rebel Auror who Bellatrix wanted to kill so badly, it would have been a disappointment (even for fans) if she (Bellatrix) hadn&#039;t managed to (kill her).
And of course, as Greg says, it was a way to create another orphan because of Voldemort&#039;s war, just like Harry. With the exception that, unlike Harry, Teddy would have lots of people around him who would love him, including his godfather.

&lt;b&gt;Moody&#039;s body&lt;/b&gt;
I felt desperately hopeful that Moody would reappear in the end; you know, the tough figure, indestructible and rising again when everybody thought was dead. This hope, of course, was derived from the very fact that they never found his body. I kept telling myself &quot;the eye doesn&#039;t mean anything, he could have dropped it anytime, he&#039;s still alive&quot;. But no.
I think the message JKR tried to send with his body not ever being found is that, war and terrorism are just like that. There are times when you&#039;ll hear horrible things, times when you will witness them, and times when you simply won&#039;t know. His body was lost, nobody ever knew of him. That happens in real life, the tragic and sad Air France plane crash that recently took place demonstrates it. Some bodies you will find, some... you won&#039;t.

&lt;b&gt;Crabbe&lt;/b&gt;
Well of course Malfoy wasn&#039;t going to die, he was going to worm his way out of trouble again, just like his father did the first time Voldemort fell. But his minions weren&#039;t going to come out unharmed. It would have been more... let&#039;s toss some cliche words here like &quot;tragic&quot; and &quot;poetic&quot; if both Crabbe and Goyle had died. Draco Malfoy would have been left truly alone and friendless and serve him right, and he would have been more devastated still; he probably would grow up to be an entirely decent person, quite unlike his father. Now THAT would have been unacceptable for us readers, Malfoy had to keep some nastiness in him. So she only kills one (I think the effect would have been exactly the same if she had killed Goyle). It&#039;s a death and Malfoy really feels it, but he still has Goyle, he&#039;s not all alone, so he keeps some of his horrible self (as proved when he yells at the death eaters that he&#039;s &quot;one of them&quot;).

&lt;b&gt;Fred Weasley&lt;/b&gt;
This one really got me, because I didn&#039;t expect any of the twins to die. But I think that it was the most... viable solution.
You see, obviously not every Weasley was going to survive (Mrs. Weasley&#039;s fears were founded). But Mr. Weasley couldn&#039;t die, he had already been given a reprieve in book 5; Mrs. Weasley, I don&#039;t know why, but I just never saw her dying... and I was right, though I have not a firm reason to back this hunch. Bill had just married and he, like Mr. Weasley, had already suffered his own aftermath (Some would say that this would also apply for Moody and he needn&#039;t had died, but Moody&#039;s scars, eye and leg were aftermaths from the first war, so... anyway, highly debatable, as everything in the Potter world). Ginny wouldn&#039;t die, as stated in your article. Neither would Ron (again, your article makes the reasons clear). Percy, the repented son is too much of a poetic example to waste (parable of the prodigal son), so he wouldn&#039;t die; besides, he gets furious with Fred&#039;s death, so he also becomes an avenger. So who&#039;s left? The twins. I don&#039;t know if George&#039;s death would have had the same effect (I think it would, but JKR explained something about Fred being just a tiny bit more reckless... besides, (again) George had already suffered some aftermath with his ear.

&lt;b&gt;Snape&lt;/b&gt;
Oh boy... I&#039;m going to keep this one short, because my comment is already too long... and I think I&#039;d need at least three pages to say everything I have to say about Snape.
&quot;Poor Severus&quot;, as Dumbledore said. I think, for dramatic effects, he had no reason to die (for plot effects, of course he was a goner). I think he could have lived, unlike Hedwig (She had to go because she was the last remainder of Harry&#039;s innocence and childhood), unlike Dobby (he had to go because it was the perfect culmination to his life: a hero&#039;s death, saving his very own hero, Harry Potter), unlike Bathilda Bagshot (the lure for knowledge in Godric&#039;s Hollow). He could have died and still explained everything to Harry. But of course, there was Voldemort&#039;s ignorance... it really was a shocking scene when Nagini killed Snape, not only because seeing a snake kill a man is disturbing enough, but also (as Harry reflects) WHY it happened. I think it was the very last and perfect example of how ruthless and evil Voldemort can be. &quot;Just for a wand. Just because you&#039;re there, standing in the way between me and the perfect mastering of this wand. I don&#039;t care that you have served me so long and so efficiently, I don&#039;t care you destroyed my enemy Dumbledore. This is something I want, so I destroy you.&quot; Pure evil!

&lt;b&gt;Voldemort&lt;/b&gt;
Well of course she wasn&#039;t going to let Voldemort live (not even like Grindelwald). First of all, that would have left space for an eight book and she didn&#039;t want one. Second of all, it would have been a mess, even worse than the mess humanity already is. He had to die because of symbolism. We see it everywhere. What difference would have Voldemort made if he had no followers? If he was completely alone? She exemplifies, with Voldemort, the power a person can get because other people allow them to. It is a powerful message that is still beyond my understanding, the damage a single person can do because he/she is able to persuade many others.

Anyway, I really enjoyed your article, of course there is much more to say about it, but I think I&#039;ll stop here... for the sake of sanity, mostly =P
Greetings!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, I really enjoyed reading what you had to say on this book, which is my top favorite of the series.<br />
I felt you were truly objective and, to some point, wise. I read your predictions and I have to say, I wasn&#8217;t really that amazed with them (most hardcore Harry Potter fans had a lot of those predictions); what really amazed me was how you got to those predictions: not by fully understanding the whole plot, but by understanding the AUTHOR and the way she toys with her own story and what she has extracted from external sources, like classic stories and folklore.</p>
<p>You know, I also felt that some deaths were very random at first, but I think that&#8217;s only because Deathly Hallows is a bit fast-paced (especially compared with Order of the Phoenix). Again, most hardcore Potter-fans would help understanding the deaths here, if only there was one close by&#8230; oh wait, there is! Yours truly =). If you will, I&#8217;d like to revise some of the deaths that took place in Deathly Hallows and I would be very very flattered if some readers would give me their feedback.</p>
<p><b>Tonks and Lupin</b><br />
A huge and obvious clue of Lupin&#8217;s death was given since the Marauder&#8217;s Map appeared on the series. Messrs. Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs. Many Potter-fans guessed (correctly) that JKR was giving us the death order in this introduction. This theory was strengthened enormously with Sirius&#8217;s death, and later on with Pettigrew&#8217;s. The moment Pettigrew died, it became obvious that Lupin would snuff it too, and he did. I found the whole map names-death order relationship very clever. It was yelling us who was going to die, right from book 3.<br />
Tonks was some sort of rebel Auror who Bellatrix wanted to kill so badly, it would have been a disappointment (even for fans) if she (Bellatrix) hadn&#8217;t managed to (kill her).<br />
And of course, as Greg says, it was a way to create another orphan because of Voldemort&#8217;s war, just like Harry. With the exception that, unlike Harry, Teddy would have lots of people around him who would love him, including his godfather.</p>
<p><b>Moody&#8217;s body</b><br />
I felt desperately hopeful that Moody would reappear in the end; you know, the tough figure, indestructible and rising again when everybody thought was dead. This hope, of course, was derived from the very fact that they never found his body. I kept telling myself &#8220;the eye doesn&#8217;t mean anything, he could have dropped it anytime, he&#8217;s still alive&#8221;. But no.<br />
I think the message JKR tried to send with his body not ever being found is that, war and terrorism are just like that. There are times when you&#8217;ll hear horrible things, times when you will witness them, and times when you simply won&#8217;t know. His body was lost, nobody ever knew of him. That happens in real life, the tragic and sad Air France plane crash that recently took place demonstrates it. Some bodies you will find, some&#8230; you won&#8217;t.</p>
<p><b>Crabbe</b><br />
Well of course Malfoy wasn&#8217;t going to die, he was going to worm his way out of trouble again, just like his father did the first time Voldemort fell. But his minions weren&#8217;t going to come out unharmed. It would have been more&#8230; let&#8217;s toss some cliche words here like &#8220;tragic&#8221; and &#8220;poetic&#8221; if both Crabbe and Goyle had died. Draco Malfoy would have been left truly alone and friendless and serve him right, and he would have been more devastated still; he probably would grow up to be an entirely decent person, quite unlike his father. Now THAT would have been unacceptable for us readers, Malfoy had to keep some nastiness in him. So she only kills one (I think the effect would have been exactly the same if she had killed Goyle). It&#8217;s a death and Malfoy really feels it, but he still has Goyle, he&#8217;s not all alone, so he keeps some of his horrible self (as proved when he yells at the death eaters that he&#8217;s &#8220;one of them&#8221;).</p>
<p><b>Fred Weasley</b><br />
This one really got me, because I didn&#8217;t expect any of the twins to die. But I think that it was the most&#8230; viable solution.<br />
You see, obviously not every Weasley was going to survive (Mrs. Weasley&#8217;s fears were founded). But Mr. Weasley couldn&#8217;t die, he had already been given a reprieve in book 5; Mrs. Weasley, I don&#8217;t know why, but I just never saw her dying&#8230; and I was right, though I have not a firm reason to back this hunch. Bill had just married and he, like Mr. Weasley, had already suffered his own aftermath (Some would say that this would also apply for Moody and he needn&#8217;t had died, but Moody&#8217;s scars, eye and leg were aftermaths from the first war, so&#8230; anyway, highly debatable, as everything in the Potter world). Ginny wouldn&#8217;t die, as stated in your article. Neither would Ron (again, your article makes the reasons clear). Percy, the repented son is too much of a poetic example to waste (parable of the prodigal son), so he wouldn&#8217;t die; besides, he gets furious with Fred&#8217;s death, so he also becomes an avenger. So who&#8217;s left? The twins. I don&#8217;t know if George&#8217;s death would have had the same effect (I think it would, but JKR explained something about Fred being just a tiny bit more reckless&#8230; besides, (again) George had already suffered some aftermath with his ear.</p>
<p><b>Snape</b><br />
Oh boy&#8230; I&#8217;m going to keep this one short, because my comment is already too long&#8230; and I think I&#8217;d need at least three pages to say everything I have to say about Snape.<br />
&#8220;Poor Severus&#8221;, as Dumbledore said. I think, for dramatic effects, he had no reason to die (for plot effects, of course he was a goner). I think he could have lived, unlike Hedwig (She had to go because she was the last remainder of Harry&#8217;s innocence and childhood), unlike Dobby (he had to go because it was the perfect culmination to his life: a hero&#8217;s death, saving his very own hero, Harry Potter), unlike Bathilda Bagshot (the lure for knowledge in Godric&#8217;s Hollow). He could have died and still explained everything to Harry. But of course, there was Voldemort&#8217;s ignorance&#8230; it really was a shocking scene when Nagini killed Snape, not only because seeing a snake kill a man is disturbing enough, but also (as Harry reflects) WHY it happened. I think it was the very last and perfect example of how ruthless and evil Voldemort can be. &#8220;Just for a wand. Just because you&#8217;re there, standing in the way between me and the perfect mastering of this wand. I don&#8217;t care that you have served me so long and so efficiently, I don&#8217;t care you destroyed my enemy Dumbledore. This is something I want, so I destroy you.&#8221; Pure evil!</p>
<p><b>Voldemort</b><br />
Well of course she wasn&#8217;t going to let Voldemort live (not even like Grindelwald). First of all, that would have left space for an eight book and she didn&#8217;t want one. Second of all, it would have been a mess, even worse than the mess humanity already is. He had to die because of symbolism. We see it everywhere. What difference would have Voldemort made if he had no followers? If he was completely alone? She exemplifies, with Voldemort, the power a person can get because other people allow them to. It is a powerful message that is still beyond my understanding, the damage a single person can do because he/she is able to persuade many others.</p>
<p>Anyway, I really enjoyed your article, of course there is much more to say about it, but I think I&#8217;ll stop here&#8230; for the sake of sanity, mostly =P<br />
Greetings!</p>
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		<title>Comment on A Guide to Ethical Self-Promotion by Op-Ed: When Self-Promotion Goes Too Far by Beth Johnson &#124; Fantasy Literature News &#38; Interviews</title>
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		<dc:creator>Op-Ed: When Self-Promotion Goes Too Far by Beth Johnson &#124; Fantasy Literature News &#38; Interviews</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Jun 2009 18:57:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Mark Helprin&#8217;s &#8220;Memoir from Antproof Case&#8221; by A June Anniversary, such a lovely thing &#171; Not Your Oprah&#8217;s Bookclub</title>
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		<dc:creator>A June Anniversary, such a lovely thing &#171; Not Your Oprah&#8217;s Bookclub</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jun 2009 02:49:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Brian Herbert and Kevin Anderson&#8217;s &#8220;Dune&#8221; Prequels by Pat</title>
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		<dc:creator>Pat</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jun 2009 01:47:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am frustrated that there are so many errors in the prequels: how Jessica came to be the Duke&#039;s concubine, the reason the Baron is fat, Emporer was married(Dune says consort), Jessica did not know about the Kwistaz Haderach program when she conceived (Dune implies she did), Jessica knew Dr Yeuh since before Paul was conceived (Dune says she only knew him 6 years at the time Paul was 15) and on and on.  Has anyone else noticed this?  I see many others and I feel that if I as a recreational, ableit frequent, reader can pick these out that someone/his son researching to write Dune prequels should be able to see this and avoid these conflicts.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am frustrated that there are so many errors in the prequels: how Jessica came to be the Duke&#8217;s concubine, the reason the Baron is fat, Emporer was married(Dune says consort), Jessica did not know about the Kwistaz Haderach program when she conceived (Dune implies she did), Jessica knew Dr Yeuh since before Paul was conceived (Dune says she only knew him 6 years at the time Paul was 15) and on and on.  Has anyone else noticed this?  I see many others and I feel that if I as a recreational, ableit frequent, reader can pick these out that someone/his son researching to write Dune prequels should be able to see this and avoid these conflicts.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Infoquake&#8221; Now Available on Amazon Kindle by Cindy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cindy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jun 2009 23:34:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is the only thing I&#039;ve seen so far that makes me want to buy a Kindle! Must...own...every...possible...version...of...Infoquake... :-)</description>
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