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		<title>&#8220;MultiReal&#8221;: It&#8217;s Done</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[The photo you see here is the completed manuscript of my second novel, MultiReal, the sequel to Infoquake. It&#8217;s been somewhere around three years in the making, and now it&#8217;s done. The book measures 477 pages, or about 148,000 words (including appendices). There are 6 sections, 45 chapters, and 8 appendices. The opening epigraph comes [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p id="top" /><img style="float:right; margin:0 0 10px 10px" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/multireal-ms.jpg" alt="'MultiReal' manuscript" width="266" height="280" />The photo you see here is <strong>the completed manuscript of my second novel, <em>MultiReal</em></strong>, the sequel to <a href="http://www.infoquake.net/"><em>Infoquake</em></a>. It&#8217;s been somewhere around three years in the making, and now it&#8217;s done.</p>
<p>The book measures 477 pages, or about 148,000 words (including appendices). There are 6 sections, 45 chapters, and 8 appendices. The opening epigraph comes from Walt Whitman&#8217;s &#8220;Song of Myself.&#8221; The tagline? &#8220;Infinite possibility is only a state of mind.&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>Now, when I say the book is done, of course that doesn&#8217;t mean it&#8217;s absolutely, completely <em>done</em>.</strong> That means it&#8217;s going off to my editor at Pyr, Lou Anders, for any last-minute comments. I&#8217;ll be printing out another copy of the book for myself and giving it a last read-through with red pen in hand. I&#8217;ll be incorporating those changes by the end of the month &#8212; and <em>then</em> the book goes off to the copy editor. But I expect the changes to be pretty minor from this point on.</p>
<p>(Want to know how finicky I am? The printouts after the jump below showing some of my line edits to <em>MultiReal</em> are from the <em>fourth</em> complete draft of the book.)</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s an example of the kind of changes I&#8217;m talking about. I discovered yesterday that, after who knows how many read-throughs and rewrites, in chapter 45 one of my characters was &#8220;threading her way through the throngs of Thasselians.&#8221; I&#8217;ll admit I&#8217;m not always above allocating an assortment of alliteration in my writing, but this one was totally unintentional. And it sounded ridiculous, so it needed to be fixed. (The even <em>more</em> ridiculous part is that I had misspelled &#8220;throngs&#8221; as &#8220;thongs.&#8221; Freudian slip?)</p>
<p>So having completed the book, I can definitely say this: <strong>you have never, ever read a book like <em>MultiReal</em> before.</strong></p>
<p><em>MultiReal</em> might be the most exciting book you&#8217;ve ever read that contains both a series of Congressional speeches and a three-way dartgun battle. It has both a granular discussion about the ethics of different software pricing models and a virtual sex scene with four-breasted mermaids.</p>
<p>To give you an idea of how complex this book is, chew on this: there are three main point-of-view characters, three minor point-of-view characters, one chapter in epistolary form, and one chapter from the global omniscient point of view. The prose slips from past to present tense a few times. You&#8217;re going to learn that one important piece of history mentioned in <em>Infoquake</em> didn&#8217;t quite happen the way you think it happened. Some of the characters speak in code. More than one have double allegiances. Oh, and have I mentioned the <strong>multiple, alternate, simultaneous, and asynchronous realities</strong>?</p>
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<p><img style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; float: left" title="Draft page from 'MultiReal'" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/multireal-draft-page-1.jpg" alt="Draft page from 'MultiReal'" width="240" height="300" />The plot bobs and weaves around, with a number of false starts and red herrings. There really isn&#8217;t one single narrative thread running through the book like there was in <em>Infoquake</em>. It&#8217;s still largely Natch&#8217;s story, of course, but Jara&#8217;s going to come much further into the foreground. And by the time the book comes to a close, you&#8217;re not going to know who the good guys are and who the bad guys are, or whether some of them are still alive. If I&#8217;m counting correctly, there will be a total of eight different competing factions by the end.</p>
<p>In other words: <strong><em>MultiReal</em> is designed to be trippy, challenging, and more than a little disorienting.</strong> One of the major themes of the book is the difficulty of making tough decisions based on incomplete information &#8212; and what if you didn&#8217;t have to? So if I&#8217;ve done my job correctly, you the reader will get a taste of what the characters are going through.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a delicate tightrope for a writer to walk. The book has to be daunting enough to surprise you and confuse you at times; but it also has to be easy enough to follow that you don&#8217;t need a pad of graph paper and a scientific calculator. It&#8217;s got to have the meat of a grand political saga, the seasoning of a science fiction thriller, and the special sauce of old-school <em>Wired</em> magazine.</p>
<p><strong>But that&#8217;s not to say <em>MultiReal</em> won&#8217;t be a lot of <em>fun</em>.</strong> You&#8217;ll meet a Natch look-alike named Geronimo who plays for a band called Dregs of Nitro. You&#8217;ll see Robby Robby with a big, frizzy Afro. You&#8217;ll see Quell opening a six-pack of whoop-ass with a big, electrified shock baton. You&#8217;ll see the top floor of the Revelation Spire (the world&#8217;s tallest building), which houses the remnants of the <em>Venus de Milo</em>. You&#8217;ll get a taste of what a MultiReal-fueled soccer match would look like. You&#8217;ll see how the diss make coffee. You&#8217;ll get to meet the infamous Aunt Berilla and see what happens when the Surina/Natch MultiReal Fiefcorp crashes her estate. You&#8217;ll see a drudge get pushed in front of a moving tube train. You&#8217;ll see the Defense and Wellness Council kicking ass, taking names, and then putting all those names on 24-hour surveillance. You&#8217;ll see Horvil using MultiReal to perform acrobatics on a darkened stairwell. And <em>oh</em> so much more.</p>
<p><img style="margin: 0px 0px 10px 10px; float: right" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/multireal-draft-page-2.jpg" alt="Draft page from 'MultiReal'" width="240" height="300" />I&#8217;m still a novice at this novel-writing thing, so take this opinion with a grain of salt. But <strong>book 2 was about five times as hard to write as book 1.</strong></p>
<p>I had a number of false starts. At some point, I intend to post all the first drafts of <em>MultiReal</em>&#8216;s chapter 1, just like I did with <em>Infoquake</em>. (<a href="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/jump225/infoquake/drafts/">Read the nine drafts of <em>Infoquake</em>&#8216;s chapter 1.</a>) (<span style="font-weight: bold; color: red;">Update 8/25/08 @ 1:30 PM:</span> <a href="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/jump225/multireal/web-exclusives/drafts/">Here they are</a>.) But we&#8217;re not just talking about differences in style and tone here. There were entire subplots considered, begun, and abandoned. There were a few times when I polished and polished that first chapter until it was <em>perfect</em>&#8230; only to decide that I needed to go in an entirely different direction. My wife and I even drove out to Harper&#8217;s Ferry so I could get a good look at the setting for one of those abandoned chapters. (Luckily, it wasn&#8217;t an entirely wasted trip; Harper&#8217;s Ferry does make a short appearance in the beginning of chapter 2.)</p>
<p>I&#8217;m hoping that <em>Geosynchron</em>, book 3 in the Jump 225 Trilogy, proves to be much easier to write. I&#8217;ve got a detailed outline and some individual scenes sketched out in my head. I&#8217;ve also got a very old first draft already written, though it&#8217;s so far out of date it will almost be no help. (To put things in perspective&#8230; when I wrote this first draft, Quell was an old man who liked to smoke hand-rolled cigarettes, Brone had died during the Shortest Initiation in book 1, and Natch still had a spunky girlfriend named Ferris. Then again, when I finished this draft, the only thing special about September 11 was that Bob Dylan&#8217;s long-awaited new album was expected to be released on that day.)</p>
<p>Excited? Can&#8217;t wait? Don&#8217;t worry, there&#8217;s still plenty of time to <a href="http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/redirect?link_code=as2&amp;path=ASIN/1591024420&amp;tag=thejohnbarthinfo&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325">order a copy of <em>Infoquake</em></a> and read it through before <em>MultiReal</em> hits the shelves. Pyr has yet to announce their final schedule for the season, so I&#8217;m not going to pretend to give you an <em>official</em> word about scheduling &#8212; but <strong>it looks like we&#8217;re talking about Summer 2008.</strong></p>
<p>And don&#8217;t worry, I&#8217;m planning all kinds of crunchy, wholesome promotional goodness surrounding the book. There&#8217;ll be free online material, con appearances, giveaway contests, podcasts and video blogs, readings, and more. So keep your RSS feed readers tuned to this here blog now, m&#8217;kay?</p>
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