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		<title>Read Chapters 1-5 of &#8220;MultiReal&#8221; in the Pyr Sampler</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Interested in reading chapters 1-5 of my new novel MultiReal, a good three and a half months before the book&#8217;s in stores? Now&#8217;s your chance. Pyr has just released a 326-page sampler (PDF, 3.5 MB) of its upcoming titles for the spring and summer, and the first 45 pages or so of MultiReal are in [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p id="top" />Interested in reading chapters 1-5 of my new novel <em>MultiReal</em>, a good three and a half months before the book&#8217;s in stores? Now&#8217;s your chance. Pyr has just released a <a href="http://www.pyrsf.com/chapters/PyrSampler.pdf">326-page sampler</a> (PDF, 3.5 MB) of its upcoming titles for the spring and summer, and the first 45 pages or so of <em>MultiReal</em> are in it. Keep your eye out at science fiction conventions if you want to get your hands on a paper copy, sure to be a collector&#8217;s edition and make you a multi-millionaire when you auction it off on eBay in the year 2035.</p>
<p><img src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/multireal-medium.jpg" alt="'MultiReal' book cover" style="float:right; margin:0 0 10px 10px" height="387" width="250" />(FYI, the announcement for this sampler mistakenly says that my excerpt is from 2006&#8242;s <em>Infoquake</em>. Rest assured, the 45 pages in the Pyr sampler are indeed from <em>MultiReal</em>.)</p>
<p>Also included in the sampler are excerpts from <strong>Joe Abercrombie</strong>&#8216;s <em>Before They Are Hanged</em> (sequel to the acclaimed <em>The Blade Itself</em>); <strong>Kay Kenyon</strong>&#8216;s <em>A World Too Near</em> (sequel to the equally acclaimed <em>Bright of the Sky</em>); <strong>Theodore Judson</strong>&#8216;s <em>The Martian General&#8217;s Daughter</em>; <strong>Robert Silverberg</strong>&#8216;s classic <em>Son of Man</em>; and two from <strong>Mike Resnick</strong>, <em>Stalking the Unicorn</em> and <em>Stalking the Vampire</em>.</p>
<p>But first, a few words about the excerpt from <em>MultiReal</em>.</p>
<p><strong>What you&#8217;re reading in this sampler is the entire first section of the book, titled &#8220;Lessons Learned.&#8221;</strong> Three of these chapters are written from the point of view of a new character, Magan Kai Lee, the lieutenant executive of the Defense and Wellness Council. (Actually, he&#8217;s not <em>entirely</em> a new character. If you re-read <em>Infoquake</em>, you&#8217;ll notice that he makes a cameo appearance in chapter 5, though he&#8217;s not mentioned by name.) One chapter is a 40-year-old flashback written from Margaret Surina&#8217;s point of view. Only one chapter of this excerpt features Natch, the trilogy&#8217;s protagonist and central character. Jara, the series&#8217; secondary protagonist, isn&#8217;t even mentioned in these five chapters, even though she plays a major part in <em>MultiReal</em>.</p>
<p>I always knew it was going to be difficult to create a suitable excerpt for this book. As I&#8217;ve written <a href="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/film/writing-sequels/">before</a>, the middle book of a trilogy is an enormous challenge. I&#8217;ve made it doubly so by creating such a complicated backstory for the universe. Pity the poor opening chapters of <em>MultiReal</em>, because I&#8217;ve saddled them with all of these duties:</p>
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<li>Re-introducing the important background concepts in the story (multi, bio/logic programming, creeds, L-PRACGs, MultiReal)</li>
<li>Re-introducing the important bits of background history (the Autonomous Revolt, the death of Marcus Surina)</li>
<li>Re-introducing the main characters (Natch, Horvil, and Jara) as well as the secondary characters (Len Borda, Margaret Surina, Benyamin, Merri, Serr Vigal, Quell, the Patel Brothers, and Brone)</li>
<li>Introducing several <em>new</em> characters (Magan Kai Lee, Papizon, Rey Gonerev, Ridgello, and Khann Frejohr)</li>
<li>Summarizing the important bits that happened in <em>Infoquake</em></li>
<li>Setting up the conflicts for the rest of <em>MultiReal</em></li>
<li>Engaging the reader so they&#8217;re interested in reading more (or buying the book in the first place)</li>
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<p>I concluded that <strong>it&#8217;s nearly impossible to cover all of this ground without turning the opening chapters into one big, fat gelatinous glob of exposition.</strong> So when you finally do get your grubby hands on <em>MultiReal</em> (have I mentioned that it&#8217;s <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1591026474?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=davidlouisedelman-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=9325&amp;creativeASIN=1591026474">available for pre-order on Amazon</a>?), you&#8217;ll find that Appendix A is a rather detailed summary of <em>Infoquake</em>. It will be interesting to see if that summary is enough for those who haven&#8217;t read <em>Infoquake</em> to still enjoy <em>MultiReal</em>. At the very least, I hope it will jostle the memories of those who <em>did</em> read the first book, but have forgotten some of its details.</p>
<p>One last thing to note: <strong>for those who haven&#8217;t read <em>Infoquake</em>, there will be spoilers in this five-chapter sample of <em>MultiReal</em>.</strong> But I wouldn&#8217;t worry <em>too</em> much about it. I don&#8217;t think there&#8217;s anything in the first few chapters of book 2 that would spoil your experience of book 1. (And if you&#8217;re that concerned &#8212; well, you could always go ahead and <a href="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/jump225/infoquake/infoquake/excerpt/">start reading the first seven chapters of <em>Infoquake</em> instead</a>.)</p>
<p>Go. Read. Enjoy. Buy. Discuss.</p>
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