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		<title>Revisiting Middle Earth: &#8220;The Return of the King&#8221;</title>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p id="top" /><em>The Return of the King</em> is probably the volume of J.R.R. Tolkien&#8217;s trilogy that I remembered the least.</p>
<p><strong>It&#8217;s also the book that differs the most from Peter Jackson&#8217;s film treatment.</strong> But <em>Return of the King</em> has always been my least favorite of the three movies, and many of the wonderful moments in that film &#8212; the lighting of the beacons, Faramir&#8217;s charge on Osgiliath, the catapult battle, Pippin and Gandalf&#8217;s discussion about the afterlife &#8212; are scenes that Jackson either invented or wildly embellished. (Unfortunately, PJ also invented Sam and Frodo&#8217;s falling out over some missing <em>lembas</em> wafers. Ugh.)</p>
<p><strong><img style="margin: 0px 0px 10px 10px; float: right" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/return-of-the-king-cover-1.jpg" alt="'Return of the King' cover" width="165" height="260" />So there were all kinds of gems awaiting me on my re-reading of <em>ROTK</em>.</strong> I had completely forgotten about Beregond, Guard of the Citadel, and the heroic role he plays in saving Faramir from death at the hands of Denethor. I had only a faint recollection of Ghân-buri-Ghân and the Wild Men. I didn&#8217;t recall that our heroes have a run-in with Saruman <em>before</em> the Hobbits return to the Shire. I had forgotten that the only reason Merry was able to wound the Lord of the Nazgûl was because of his sword, picked up at the Barrow-downs in the early chapters of <em>Fellowship</em>.</p>
<p>The first half of the book (book 5 of the <em>Lord of the Rings</em> proper) has simply masterful pacing. The way the tension builds throughout the siege of Gondor&#8230; and then Gandalf confronts the Lord of the Nazgûl&#8230; and then suddenly the horns of the Rohirrim blow&#8230; and <em>then</em> we backtrack to see the ride of the Rohirrim&#8230; oh <em>man</em>, is that good. It&#8217;s the big build-up that was sorely lacking before the battle of Helm&#8217;s Deep in <em>Two Towers</em>.</p>
<p>A single theme kept running through my head as I read <em>Return of the King</em>. It&#8217;s the way <strong>evil acts continually redound to the greater good in the end.</strong> Think of how Merry found his sword. The Hobbits&#8217; capture by the wights in the Barrow-downs certainly seemed like a bad turn when it happened; but this serendipitous encounter enables Merry to critically wound the Nazgûl at just the right time, thus possibly saving the entire battle from going sour and changing the fate of all Middle Earth.</p>
<p>But nothing&#8217;s that cut and dried in <em>Return of the King</em>. There&#8217;s an unsettling kind of moral determinism lurking behind the scenes here, and indeed throughout the entire trilogy. Perhaps &#8220;moral determinism&#8221; is the wrong thing to call it, but I can&#8217;t think of a better phrase to use. It&#8217;s this pervasive sense that <strong>not only does the darkness exist, but it&#8217;s actually <em>necessary</em> and an integral component to the light.</strong></p>
<p>Why do I think that? Because it seems like Tolkien is constantly giving us matched pairs of characters, one of whom turns to the path of light and one of whom follows the path of darkness.</p>
<p>Take for example the characters of <strong>Denethor</strong> and <strong>Théoden</strong>, the Steward of Gondor and the King of Rohan. Clearly Tolkien means to draw very strong parallels between the two. Notice the similarities:</p>
<ul>
<li>Both are rulers of their respective lands (Gondor and Rohan)</li>
<li>Both have recently lost firstborn sons in battle (Boromir and Théodred)</li>
<li>Both have ambivalent feelings about their remaining heirs (Faramir and Éomer)</li>
<li>Both are confronted with a devastating siege (Minas Tirith and Helm&#8217;s Deep)</li>
<li>Both have been striving against an insidious higher power (Sauron and Saruman)</li>
<li>Both take on a Hobbit squire (Pippin and Merry)</li>
<li>Both men had fathers for whom Aragorn fought in his youth (Ecthelion and Thengel)</li>
<li>Both are initially mistrustful of Gandalf</li>
<li>Both eventually grant Gandalf favors early in the saga (access to the Gondorian archives and the loan of Shadowfax)</li>
<li>Both die in <em>The Return of the King</em></li>
</ul>
<p>But obviously there&#8217;s a crucial difference between the two; one selflessly redeems himself and dies in battle, while the other stews in his bitterness until he finally commits suicide.</p>
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<p><img style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; float: left" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/return-of-the-king-cover-2.jpg" alt="'Return of the King' cover" width="165" height="249" />Denethor is constantly boasting about his uncanny foresight into the events that are shaping the War of the Ring. But Théoden clearly has a touch of it too; he knows that he won&#8217;t be returning from Minas Tirith, and tells Éomer as much. &#8220;If the war is lost, what good will be my hiding in the hills?&#8221; he responds to Éomer&#8217;s suggestion that he sit out the battle at Minas Tirith. &#8220;And if it is won, what grief will it be, even if I fall, spending my last strength?&#8221; Contrast this with how Denethor reacts to Gandalf&#8217;s suggestion that he ride out to battle: &#8220;Battle is vain. Why should we wish to live longer? Why should we not go to death side by side?&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>The symbolism in the manner of their deaths is telling.</strong> Théoden is crushed under the weight of his slain horse Snowmane, rallying his troops to battle to save someone else&#8217;s country; with his dying eyes, he sees &#8220;[a] grim morn, and a glad day, and a golden sunset.&#8221; Denethor, meanwhile, perishes in a bier of fire, which is about as close as Tolkien ever comes to suggesting the existence of a Hell.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s not just Denethor and Théoden that get the duality treatment. There are other similarly matched pairs in <em>The Lord of the Rings</em>: Frodo and Gollum. Gandalf and Saruman. Faramir and Boromir. Aragorn raises an entire company of shadow warriors whose ancient faithlessness and treachery stand in stark contrast to his company of long-suffering and loyal Dúnedain.</p>
<p>But the two characters whose duality I find the most interesting are <strong>Sauron</strong> and <strong>Galadriel</strong>.</p>
<p>Galadriel has held the realm of Lothlórien in a state of suspended animation for hundreds or thousands of years, clinging to the golden age of the Elves as long as possible. She rebelled against the Valar and left the Blessed Realm to follow Fëanor, as <em>The Silmarillion</em> tells &#8212; but despite her best efforts, the day of reckoning must come. Time moves on, and Galadriel will have to return to Valinor and face her judgment.</p>
<p><strong>But isn&#8217;t Sauron really just the mirror image of Galadriel?</strong> (Frodo even sees his Eye in Galadriel&#8217;s mirror.) Sauron too is a rebel against the Valar, trying to forestall judgment and recapture a long-lost golden age. But for Sauron it&#8217;s not Valinor he seeks to emulate but Thangorodrim, the fortress of his master Morgoth in the First Age. And what would Sauron do if he got a hold of the Ring? He&#8217;d bring the world into subservience, he&#8217;d eradicate the line of Númenor and chase the last remaining Elves away, he&#8217;d set up an eternal and changeless kingdom of darkness that would last &#8220;unto the ending of the world.&#8221;</p>
<p>Interesting that neither Sauron nor Galadriel are capable of making anything new. Sauron&#8217;s orcs and trolls are but crass imitations of Elves and ents, and his Mordor is just a recreation of Morgoth&#8217;s Thangorodrim. Likewise Galadriel&#8217;s Lothlórien is little more than a pale imitation of the glory of Valinor beyond the sea. (&#8220;[T]hey attempted nothing new, living in memory of the past,&#8221; says Tolkien in the appendices, writing about the keepers of the Three Elven Rings.)</p>
<p><img style="margin: 0px 0px 10px 10px; float: right" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/return-of-the-king-cover-3.jpg" alt="'Return of the King' cover" width="165" height="276" /><strong>It&#8217;s no accident that the destruction of the One Ring also leads to the destruction of Galadriel&#8217;s Ring too, and the end to her idyllic land of Lórien.</strong> Sauron&#8217;s puppet Saruman even gloats about it when Galadriel and company encounter him in Dunland:</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8216;I did not spend long study on these matters for naught. You have doomed yourselves, and you know it. And it will afford me some comfort as I wander to think that you pulled down your own house when you destroyed mine. And now, what ship will bear you back across so wide a sea?&#8230; It will be a grey ship, and full of ghosts.&#8217;</p></blockquote>
<p>The crucial difference between Sauron and Galadriel is that Galadriel <em>has</em> the chance to take control of the One Ring. Frodo offers it to her, in <em>Fellowship</em>, giving her a possibility of extending her exile from Valinor indefinitely. But she turns him down, thus earning the likely forgiveness of the Valar. Sauron and Saruman aren&#8217;t so lucky; on their deaths, their spirits are both blown away. Saruman&#8217;s shade specifically yearns for Valinor and forgiveness: &#8220;For a moment it wavered, looking to the West; but out of the West came a cold wind, and it bent away, and with a sigh dissolved into nothing.&#8221;</p>
<p>So we have several pairs of characters, one of whom takes the light path and one of whom takes the dark path. Sometimes it feels like everyone in Middle Earth has an ideological counterpart floating around, and that every good deed is being canceled out by an evil deed somewhere else.</p>
<p>In the end, of course, <strong>good and evil <em>don&#8217;t</em> entirely cancel each other out in Tolkien&#8217;s universe.</strong> The pity of Bilbo and Frodo saves Middle Earth and has long-lasting consequences. If either had given in to their impulses and slain Gollum when they had the chance, Frodo would have never made it to Mount Doom &#8212; and he would have never tossed the Ring in the fire if he did.</p>
<p><strong>But what I find interesting is that the <em>evil</em> acts were necessary to the success of the quest as well.</strong> Frodo&#8217;s pity would have come to nothing in the end if not for Gollum&#8217;s savage greed and the seductive evil of the One Ring. It&#8217;s that very power that drew Gollum out of the Misty Mountains to search for Bilbo in the first place. And it&#8217;s only because of that unceasing lust that Gollum is hanging around Mount Doom waiting to seize the Ring in the end.</p>
<p>Similarly, Merry wouldn&#8217;t have gotten a hold of a magic sword of Westernesse if he hadn&#8217;t been captured by the wights of the Barrow-downs. Aragorn wouldn&#8217;t have had an army from the Paths of the Dead to command if the Shadow Host hadn&#8217;t broken their oaths to Isildur long ago. Treebeard wouldn&#8217;t have roused the ents to war if Merry and Pippin hadn&#8217;t been hauled to Fangorn by the orcs.</p>
<p><img style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; float: left" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/return-of-the-king-cover-4.jpg" alt="'Return of the King' cover" width="165" height="280" />&#8220;Strange and wonderful I thought it that the designs of Mordor should be overthrown by such wraiths of fear and darkness,&#8221; says Gimli, referring to the Shadow Host. &#8220;With its own weapons was it worsted!&#8221;</p>
<p>So good and evil are striving in Middle Earth, testing each other, canceling each other out, and all getting tied up in a neat little package at the end of <em>The Return of the King</em>. <strong>It all hearkens back to the Music of the Ainur in the opening chapter of <em>The Silmarillion</em></strong>, the Genesis of Tolkien&#8217;s cosmology. You&#8217;ll remember that during that act of creation, Melkor attempts to overwhelm the theme of Eru (God) with ideas of his own. As Tolkien writes, Melkor&#8217;s competitive theme is loud and repetitive, almost a mockery of the original music.</p>
<p>But Melkor, too, is a creation of the mind of Eru. In other words: <strong>evil was clearly a part of Eru&#8217;s design from the beginning.</strong> And so there&#8217;s nothing Melkor can do that doesn&#8217;t ultimately reflect on the glory of the whole symphony. Because in Tolkien&#8217;s Middle Earth, darkness is the opposite of light, but also its enabler.</p>
<p>All the works of the enemy &#8212; <em>and</em> the Valar &#8212; ultimately reflect the glory of Eru the One. As Frodo says when he sees Arwen arriving at Minas Tirith like a star shining in the evening: &#8220;Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>The grand symphony in Tolkien&#8217;s universe is Eru&#8217;s, and both the day and the night are His design.</strong> But why He chose to write it this way is unknown, and maybe unknowable.</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p id="top" />Ideally one should write about the three books of <em>The Lord of the Rings</em> as a unit, since that&#8217;s the way J.R.R. Tolkien wrote them. It was the publisher&#8217;s decision to split the novel into three parts, a decision that the author only grudgingly accepted. He wanted <em>LOTR</em> published in six parts, with book 1 called <em>The Return of the Shadow</em>, and book 2 called <em>The Fellowship of the Ring</em>.</p>
<p><img style="margin: 0px 0px 10px 10px; float: right" title="'Fellowship of the Ring' book cover" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/fellowship-of-the-ring.jpg" alt="'Fellowship of the Ring' book cover" width="165" height="258" />But more importantly, <strong>in an ideal world one would be able to discuss <em>The Fellowship of the Ring</em> without being overshadowed by Peter Jackson&#8217;s film of the same name.</strong> Unfortunately, for me that&#8217;s impossible. I&#8217;ve seen the films probably a dozen times each since their release, enough that I can recite most of the dialogue word for word. The Extended Edition of <em>Fellowship</em> is one of my favorite films ever, ever, ever.</p>
<p>But this is the first time I&#8217;ve re-read Tolkien since the film&#8217;s release, so I was constantly reacting to things that were different from what I&#8217;m used to &#8212; as if the books were the adaptation of the films and not the other way around. And in case that&#8217;s not irritating enough, I couldn&#8217;t picture anyone but Viggo Mortensen and Elijah Wood as Aragorn and Frodo, while Ian McKellen&#8217;s voice kept ringing out whenever Gandalf opened his mouth. It&#8217;s kind of like reading those annoying New Testament Bibles where Jesus&#8217;s words are printed in red; every snippet of dialogue that was used in the films stands out.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s especially a nuisance when you consider that <strong>J.R.R. Tolkien and Peter Jackson had vastly different agendas.</strong> Jackson made wonderful films in their own right. But they&#8217;re distinctly different in tone from the books, and I&#8217;m convinced now that Tolkien himself would have hated them.</p>
<p>What&#8217;s the difference? Take just one example, the battle with the orcs and the cave troll in the mines of Moria. Jackson lavishes plenty of attention on the battle, with multiple decapitations, thrown swords, close escapes, and a (somewhat clunky) CGI troll that vexes the Fellowship for a good ten minutes. But in the book, here&#8217;s how Tolkien describes that battle:</p>
<blockquote><p>The affray was sharp, but the orcs were dismayed by the fierceness of the defence. Legolas shot two through the throat. Gimli hewed the legs from under another that had sprung up on Balin&#8217;s tomb. Boromir and Aragorn slew many. When thirteen had fallen the rest fled shrieking, leaving the defenders unharmed, except for Sam who had a scratch along the scalp.</p></blockquote>
<p>There are a few more paragraphs describing the setup and denouement, but you can tell that Tolkien&#8217;s heart isn&#8217;t in it. The entirety of the scene that Jackson spends fifteen minutes on is a single page of Tolkien&#8217;s manuscript.</p>
<p>In fact, I was stunned to discover that <strong>all of the action sequences that thrilled me as a kid are really much, much shorter than I had remembered.</strong> The flight to the Ford? A measly 2 1/2 pages. Gandalf&#8217;s confrontation with the Balrog? 2 1/2 pages. Frodo&#8217;s fight with the Nazgûl near Weathertop? One page. And just think of all the dramatic sequences that Tolkien either doesn&#8217;t describe at all or relegates to a character&#8217;s secondhand report:</p>
<ul>
<li> Gandalf&#8217;s confrontation with Saruman and escape from Orthanc</li>
<li>Gandalf&#8217;s battle with the Black Riders on Weathertop</li>
<li>Gollum&#8217;s escape from Mirkwood</li>
<li>The Black Riders&#8217; incursion into Bree</li>
<li>The elves&#8217; battle with the orcs inside Lothlórien</li>
<li>Boromir&#8217;s last battle with the orcs</li>
<li>Glorfindel&#8217;s attack on the Nazgûl at the Ford</li>
</ul>
<p>And that&#8217;s all just in <em>Fellowship</em>. The issue will become even more pronounced in <em>The Two Towers</em>, when Tolkien chooses to sit out the ents&#8217; attack on Isengard.</p>
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<p><img style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; float: left" title="'Fellowship of the Ring' book cover" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/fellowship-of-the-ring-2.jpg" alt="'Fellowship of the Ring' book cover" width="165" height="268" />The fact of the matter is that <strong>J.R.R. Tolkien has no taste for blood.</strong> He goes out of his way to avoid describing action sequences by keeping the action offstage. As soon as the swords are drawn, the authorial voice recedes and becomes distant summarization. And the summarization itself? Well, it&#8217;s not clear to me from the text that Tolkien knows anything at all about sword fighting or horse riding or archery; his descriptions don&#8217;t contain any specialized knowledge outside the imagination of your average 14-year-old. Certainly Tolkien doesn&#8217;t know swords the way George R.R. Martin knows armor, for instance, or the way Stephen Hunter knows guns.</p>
<p>So if Tolkien doesn&#8217;t care about the action sequences, what does he care about?</p>
<p>Consider this: in my edition of <em>The Fellowship of the Ring</em>, the Council of Elrond is 33 pages long. Gandalf&#8217;s infodump to Frodo in &#8220;The Shadow of the Past&#8221; stretches for about 17 pages. There must be at <em>least</em> 20 solid pages of verse interlaced throughout the book.</p>
<p><strong>It&#8217;s clear that what Tolkien adores is the act of storytelling.</strong> The book is full of it. Every five pages, it seems, the characters are sitting down around a fire to recount old history or sing a narrative song. Sometimes it seems like the entire <em>Lord of the Rings</em> is just a framework for Tolkien to hang the folk tales, myths, and poems on.</p>
<p>But not only are the characters always telling stories; they&#8217;ve got this strange postmodern awareness about their own story in progress. Sam says to Haldir in Lothlórien: &#8220;I feel as if I was <em>inside</em> a song, if you take my meaning.&#8221; Aragorn is often compared to the verses Bilbo has composed about him (&#8220;All that is gold does not glitter / Not all those who wander are lost&#8221;). Bilbo is constantly talking about how he&#8217;s going to write everything down in his book, causing Frodo and Sam to wonder several times what their story&#8217;s going to sound like when it&#8217;s set down on paper.</p>
<p>It might sound like I&#8217;m complaining about <em>The Fellowship of the Ring</em> &#8212; but I&#8217;m not. <strong>The most astonishing thing I discovered on re-reading the book is how incredibly good Tolkien is at the fundamentals of storytelling. </strong>His pacing is absolutely perfect, which as a published author I can tell you is very difficult to accomplish. He&#8217;s always very careful to properly foreshadow things that need foreshadowing. Alfred Hitchcock knew that the scariest things are the ones you <em>don&#8217;t</em> see onscreen, and Tolkien follows this rule to the letter (see above). He builds up a slow but persistent tension and menace of the unseen.</p>
<p>And his prose is better than I had remembered in most places, though surprisingly it&#8217;s not nearly as divergent in tone from <em>The Hobbit</em> as I had thought. The poetry, however, doesn&#8217;t stand up so well. Even Tolkien&#8217;s verses about the most sublime subjects are too heavy handed on the meter and rhyme. They all sound like limericks about a man from Nantucket.</p>
<p>(<strong>Tolkien also has the irritating habit of switching point of view whenever it suits him.</strong> Out of the blue, the omniscient narrator will jump into Gandalf&#8217;s or Aragorn&#8217;s head for a moment to show the reader their thoughts. Then in the next moment, their actions and motivations are shrouded in secrecy, leaving the reader to wonder what&#8217;s going on. Not a hanging offense, but sloppy writing nonetheless.)</p>
<p><img style="margin: 0px 0px 10px 10px; float: right" src="http://www.davidlouisedelman.com/wp-content/uploads/fellowship-of-the-ring-3.jpg" alt="'Fellowship of the Ring' book cover" width="165" height="272" /><strong>But the place where Tolkien really falls down on the job is in characterization.</strong> Most of the time, he&#8217;s far more interested in lingering on the details of the terrain and the architecture. (J.R.R. might not have known sword fighting, but <em>man</em>, did he know his trees. Ever notice that there are only four forests on the map of Middle Earth, and through the course of <em>LOTR</em> and <em>The Hobbit</em>, we spend time in them all?)</p>
<p>Frodo, Sam, and Gandalf are wonderfully realized characters, but Merry and Pippin are scarcely distinguishable at all in <em>Fellowship</em>. Legolas and Glorfindel might well have been named Anonymous Elves #23 and #24. When he does indulge in character description, Tolkien mostly doles out rather useless flowery aphorisms. Take his description of Elrond:</p>
<blockquote><p>The face of Elrond was ageless, neither old nor young, though in it was written the memory of many things both glad and sorrowful&#8230; Venerable he seemed as a king crowned with many winters, and yet hale as a tried warrior in the fulness of his strength.</p></blockquote>
<p>Then there&#8217;s the Balrog, which he describes thusly:</p>
<blockquote><p>[I]t was like a great shadow, in the middle of which was a dark form, of man-shape maybe, yet greater; and a power and terror seemed to be in it and to go before it&#8230; Its streaming mane kindled, and blazed behind it. In its right hand was a blade like a stabbing tongue of fire; in its left it held a whip of many thongs.</p></blockquote>
<p>Er, thanks. That helps a <em>lot</em>. Try putting those descriptions in <em>your</em> next short story, and watch everyone in the workshop roll their eyes.</p>
<p><strong>Characterization is actually one thing that Peter Jackson&#8217;s films did <em>better</em> than the books</strong> &#8212; and I think that&#8217;s the real reason behind the films&#8217; success. Aragorn, in particular, gets some much-needed humanization. I&#8217;m not sure why the author chose to relegate the love story with Arwen to the marginalia in the back of <em>The Return of the King</em>, but without it we&#8217;re frequently robbed of much-needed context for Aragorn&#8217;s decisions. Boromir too is given short shrift by Tolkien, but the combination of the script and Sean Bean&#8217;s superb acting truly make him come alive. And Saruman, of course, is given an actual <em>role</em> in the films, while in the books he just makes a few choice cameo appearances.</p>
<p>So one-third of the way through, I can definitely say that re-reading <em>The Lord of the Rings</em> has been an eye-opening experience. I can&#8217;t wait to dig in to <em>The Two Towers</em>.</p>
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